68. Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
There was a time when I suffered from a catastrophe, and I told myself I would never experience it anymore.
Therefore, I prepared as much as I could, and it even made me a paranoid, ha! ha
Thank you, Jason^^
See you~
Q. Does true learning only occur when we experience difficulties?
>>CORRECT!
I don’t know what definition of true learning is.
>>CORRECT!
Thus, I don’t think the true learning only occur when we experience difficulties.
>> Thus, I don’t think the learning only occurs when we experience difficulties.
That’s because, our ancestor had learned something which is true thing when they see some natural phenomenon such as ‘after raining, ground has become harder’.
>> That’s because our ancestors had learned something which was factual when they saw some natural phenomenon such as ‘after the rain, ground becomes harder’.
Furthermore, Mr. [Name] knew an existence of gravity when he saw a falling apple from the tree.
>>Furthermore, Mr. [Name] knew the existence of gravity when he saw a falling apple from the tree.
However, I partly agree with that since difficulty experiences might help people remember longer and stronger after suffering.
>> However, I partly agree to that since difficult experiences might help people remember things longer and stronger after suffering.
That’s because they don’t want to meet same situation anymore.
>>That’s because they don’t want to meet the same situation anymore.
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