69. Homework

2018-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Q: What kind of things make you disappointed? I feel disappointed when someone broke an appointment. That’s because I think the time is the most important things about everything. Regarding a working place, if contractor or sub-contractor break an appointment such as a deadline, then following schedules are also able to be delayed. And it makes the other people spend wasting time to wait for them. That’s because all the schedule of a project is fixed and related each other. For example, if a sub-contractor, which I define it group A, doesn’t finish making equipment on the target date, shipment schedule will be delayed and then a person who charges in freight has to arrange the shipping schedule again. The person will have fully stress gotten because of the shipping schedule is not hold often since it is able to be an arrangement once a two weeks, based on my experience. Consecutively, shipping will be arrived on destination after 2 weeks. And the equipment has to be checked by customs and it takes at least one week if they will not pay black money to them. And then it will be delivered at site 2 days later owing to delivery service by cargo truck. Furthermore, site workers, which I am mention it group B, have to wait the things until they receive the equipment and it will be needed minimum 3 weeks because of the shipping, customs, and delivery service. And if it is a big project, other companies, which I call it group C, who work in site will also be delayed more than one month. That’s because they will set up after finishing group B’s installation. Like an examples that I mentioned, broken appointment makes terrible situation and spend huge amount wasting time and money. Moreover, about dating with someone, if we make an appointment meeting on 2 pm, I might feel excited to meet the person starting from one hour ahead. And I will get there before 30 minutes. Since I don’t want the others wasting time for the waiting. However, unfortunately, if the person will be late the place without any reasonable reason, I will get stress and feel disappointed to him or her. That's because I think that the person is not think about the time belongs others. According the happen, the schedule that I made has to be fixed or fully changed to catch up delayed. Furthermore, I have to pretend or hide my disappoint feeling during dating with them. It gives me stress. Anyways, I am disappointed when I meet a person who is late without a good reason. Thus, if I meet the situation more than 3 times with the same person, I will avoid meeting them. Or I will be there 30 minutes or 1 hour later as a revenge to make them same feeling. =========================================================================== Rose, I would like to suggest you when you check and give me a feedback, at the same time, how about giving me an address about news at the homework box in feedback window ?

강사 첨삭

Thank you for this one, Jason^^

Regarding your suggestion, I am afraid some characters or website will cause problems in our window.

Anyways, I will find another way.

See you^^

Q: What kind of things make you disappointed?
>>CORRECT!
I feel disappointed when someone broke an appointment.

>>I feel disappointed when someone breaks an appointment.

That’s because I think the time is the most important things about everything.
>>
That’s because I think time is the most important thing about everything.
Regarding a working place, if contractor or sub-contractor break an appointment such as a deadline, then following schedules are also able to be delayed.

>>Regarding the workplace, if a contractor or a subcontractor breaks an appointment such as a deadline, then the following schedules are delayed.
And it makes the other people spend wasting time to wait for them.

>>And it makes other people waste time waiting for them.
That’s because all the schedule of a project is fixed and related each other.
>>
That’s because all the schedules of a project are fixed and related to each other.
For example, if a sub-contractor, which I define it group A, doesn’t finish making equipment on the target date, shipment schedule will be delayed and then a person who charges in freight has to arrange the shipping schedule again.

>>For example, if a sub-contractor, which I define as group A, doesn’t finish making equipment on the target date, the shipment schedule will be delayed and then a person who charges in freight has to arrange the shipping schedule again.
The person will have fully stress gotten because of the shipping schedule is not hold often since it is able to be an arrangement once a two weeks, based on my experience.

>>The person will be stressed because the shipping schedule is not held often since it is able to be arranged every two weeks, based on my experience.

 Consecutively, shipping will be arrived on destination after 2 weeks.

>> Consecutively, the shipping will arrive at the destination after 2 weeks.

 And the equipment has to be checked by customs and it takes at least one week if they will not pay black money to them.

>> CORRECT!

And then it will be delivered at site 2 days later owing to delivery service by cargo truck.

>>And then it will be delivered at the site 2 days later owing to the delivery service by cargo truck.

Furthermore, site workers, which I am mention it group B, have to wait the things until they receive the equipment and it will be needed minimum 3 weeks because of the shipping, customs, and delivery service.

>>Furthermore, site workers, which I will mention as group B, have to wait for the things until they receive the equipment and it will be need a minimum of 3 weeks because of the shipping, customs, and delivery service.

And if it is a big project, other companies, which I call it group C, who work in site will also be delayed more than one month.

>>And if it is a big project, other companies, which I will call group C, who work in site will also be delayed for more than one month.

That’s because they will set up after finishing group B’s installation.

>>CORRECT!

Like an examples that I mentioned, broken appointment makes terrible situation and spend huge amount wasting time and money.
>>
Like the examples that I mentioned, broken appointments make terrible situations and waste time and money.
Moreover, about dating with someone, if we make an appointment meeting on 2 pm, I might feel excited to meet the person starting from one hour ahead.

>>Moreover, about dating someone, if we make an appointment at 2 pm, I might feel excited to meet the person starting from one hour ahead.

 And I will get there before 30 minutes.

>>And I will get there 30 minutes before.

Since I don’t want the others wasting time for the waiting.

>>Since I don’t want the other to waste time waiting for me.

However, unfortunately, if the person will be late the place without any reasonable reason, I will get stress and feel disappointed to him or her.

>>However, unfortunately, if the person is late at the place without any reasonable reason, I will get stressed and feel disappointed towards him or her.
 That\'s because I think that the person is not think about the time belongs others.

>>That\'s because I think that the person does not think about the time which belongs to others.
 According the happen, the schedule that I made has to be fixed or fully changed to catch up delayed.

>> According to the happening, the schedule that I made has to be fixed or fully changed to catch up.
 Furthermore, I have to pretend or hide my disappoint feeling during dating with them.

>> Furthermore, I have to pretend or hide my disappointment while dating them.
 It gives me stress.
>>CORRECT!
Anyways, I am disappointed when I meet a person who is late without a good reason.

>>CORRECT!

Thus, if I meet the situation more than 3 times with the same person, I will avoid meeting them.

>>CORRECT!
Or I will be there 30 minutes or 1 hour later as a revenge to make them same feeling.
>>
Or I will be there 30 minutes or 1 hour late as a revenge to give them the same feeling.
===========================================================================
Rose, I would like to suggest you when you check and give me a feedback, at the same time, how about giving me an address about news at the homework box in feedback window ?

>> Rose, I would like to suggest when you check and give me feedback, at the same time, how about giving me the address of the news at the homework box in the feedback window?

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