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Q: At school, students are trying to become a member of a same circle that the school opened. As far as there are many other circle but they want to apply for the same circle, what is your solution for that? Answer with at least 3 alternatives.
A: It could happen at school. There seem to be a solution for that problem. The first solution is that we give students more detailed information about other circle. As far as there are few information of other circile, students will choose the circle that they are already familiar with. The second solution is that before we open the circle, we should gather students' opinion. In this way, we know what they want to do at school. The third solution is that we explain something that it is important for us to have a variety of experiences. Even though we are fixed to a certain job, it is good to experience many different things.
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Q: At school, students are trying to become a member of a same circle that the school opened.
>>Q: At school, students are trying to become a member of the same circle that the school opened.
As far as there are many other circle but they want to apply for the same circle, what is your solution for that? Answer with at least 3 alternatives.
>>As far as there are many other circles, they want to apply for the same circle, what is your solution for that? Answer with at least 3 alternatives.A: It could happen at school. There seem to be a solution for that problem.
>>Correct.
The first solution is that we give students more detailed information about other circle.
>>The first solution, is we give students more detailed information about other circles.
As far as there are few information of other circcle, students will choose the circle that they are already familiar with.
>>As far as there are few information about other circles, students will choose the circle that they are already familiar with.
The second solution is that before we open the circle, we should gather students\' opinion.
>>The second solution, is before we open the circle, we should gather students\' opinions
In this way, we know what they want to do at school.
>>Correct!
The third solution is that we explain something that it is important for us to have a variety of experiences.
>>The third solution, is we should explain that it is important for us to have a variety of experiences.
Even though we are fixed to a certain job, it is good to experience many different things.
>>Correct!
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