6th homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
[ESSAY]
Write about a memorable weekend you had. What made it special?
A: A few weeks ago, my wife and I rode a bike on road of han river. I think that is good routine on weekend for our relationship increasing more. So I am tring to ride on weekend If we can
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ho!
Great job sharing your weekend activity! I like that you explained how it helps your relationship. Remember to use \'trying\' instead of \'tring\' and \'on weekends\' instead of \'on weekend\'. Next time, you could add a detail about what you enjoy most while riding together to make your paragraph even more interesting.
~Teacher Polly
>>A few weeks ago, my wife and I rode bikes on the road along the Han River.
I think that is good routine on weekend for our relationship increasing more.
>>I think that is a good weekend routine for improving our relationship.
So I am tring to ride on weekend If we can
>>So I am trying to ride on weekends if we can.
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