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Today is the last class of this week. I'm so sorry that.. ^^ To be honest with my teacher, I didn’t review the class. So, I'll review and preview them during this weekend. I'm planning to take a rest all this weekend for the first time in this year because i have to work eventhough the holiday and the weekend. One day, I'm going to join the festival to my son's kindergarten and The other day, I'm going to go to amusement park with family members. I'm not good at having the time with my children especially outdoors activity. I'll try to do my best for a having a great time. ^^ And today's class is so good because I can hear your voice clearly. Most of time it's a bit noisy around you. It makes me difficult to here your voice. Have a great time "faye". i'll wait for the next Monday. ^^

Hello [이름]! Have a great weekend with your family. It's good to hear that you are going to spend time with your family. It's a start. I know that after your weekend you will spend time with your family more often than before. I hope that you can hear me clearly everyday. Take care always! See you Monday! T.Faye   Here are some corrections to your composition: Today is the last class of this week. >>Correct! I'm so sorry that.. ^^ To be honest with my teacher, I didn’t review the class. >>I'm so sorry.  To be honest, I didn't review for class.So, I'll review and preview them during this weekend. >>So I'll review this weekend.  I'm planning to take a rest all this weekend for the first time in this year because i have to work eventhough the holiday and the weekend. >>I'm planning to take a rest this weekend for the first time this year because I have to work eventhough it's a holiday or a weekend.One day, I'm going to join the festival to my son's kindergarten and The other day, I'm going to go to amusement park with family members. >>I'm going to join the festival of my son's kindergarten and the next day, I'm going to the amusement park with my family.I'm not good at having the time with my children especially outdoors activity. >>I'm not good at having the time with my children especially in outdoor activities. I'll try to do my best for a having a great time. ^^ >>I'll try to do my best in having a great time with them.^^And today's class is so good because I can hear your voice clearly. >>Correct! Most of time it's a bit noisy around you. >>Correct! It makes me difficult to here your voice. >>It is difficult to hear your voice. Have a great time "faye". >>Correct! i'll wait for the next Monday. ^^ >>I'll wait for Monday,^^