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2013-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I'm tired. because, I'm whatched the movie last night. The movie start at pm10 end am1. With my younger brother. The movie is So-so. The story is predictable. However, funny. ----------------------- It's sunny and partly cloudy. --------------------------- Yes. I'm studying persistently. ----------------------- After class, I will lunch. I'm prepared a lunch box. The content is apple, tomato, oriental melen. Yesterday, I'm bought in fruit shop. ----------------------------- They bought a computer. The computer is eapensive. But the price is reasonable. Also, They need an air conditioner. But, They could't afford.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I\'m glad because even if you feel tired you still did your best in the class. Keep it up! Take care and have a nice day! T. JanE ^^ I\'m tired. because, I\'m whatched the movie last night.>> I\'m tired because I watched a movie last night.The movie start at pm10 end am1.>> The movie started at 10 pm and it ended at 1 am.With my younger brother.>> I watched the movie with my younger brother.The movie is So-so.>> The movie was not so good, but it was not bad.The story was predictable.>> Correct However, funny.>> However, it was funny.It\'s sunny and partly cloudy.>> Correct Yes, I\'m studying persistently.>> Correct After class, I will lunch.>> After class, I will eat lunch.I\'m prepared a lunch box.>> I prepared a lunch box.The content is apple, tomato, oriental melen.>> It contains apple, tomato, and oriental melon.Yesterday, I\'m bought in fruit shop.>> I bought them yesterday in a fruit shop. They bought a computer.>> Correct The computer is expensive. But the price is reasonable.>> Correct Also, they need an air conditioner. But, they could\'t afford. >> Correct

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