7.1
학생이 쓴 원문
I'm tired.
because, I'm whatched the movie last night.
The movie start at pm10 end am1.
With my younger brother.
The movie is So-so.
The story is predictable.
However, funny.
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It's sunny and partly cloudy.
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Yes. I'm studying persistently.
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After class, I will lunch.
I'm prepared a lunch box.
The content is apple, tomato, oriental melen.
Yesterday, I'm bought in fruit shop.
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They bought a computer.
The computer is eapensive. But the price is reasonable.
Also, They need an air conditioner. But, They could't afford.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! I\'m glad because even if you feel tired you still did your best in the class. Keep it up! Take care and have a nice day!
T. JanE ^^
I\'m tired. because, I\'m whatched the movie last night.>> I\'m tired because I watched a movie last night.The movie start at pm10 end am1.>> The movie started at 10 pm and it ended at 1 am.With my younger brother.>> I watched the movie with my younger brother.The movie is So-so.>> The movie was not so good, but it was not bad.The story was predictable.>> Correct However, funny.>> However, it was funny.It\'s sunny and partly cloudy.>> Correct Yes, I\'m studying persistently.>> Correct After class, I will lunch.>> After class, I will eat lunch.I\'m prepared a lunch box.>> I prepared a lunch box.The content is apple, tomato, oriental melen.>> It contains apple, tomato, and oriental melon.Yesterday, I\'m bought in fruit shop.>> I bought them yesterday in a fruit shop.
They bought a computer.>> Correct The computer is expensive. But the price is reasonable.>> Correct Also, they need an air conditioner. But, they could\'t afford.
>> Correct
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