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2016-02-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Q:Nobody is perfect in this world. We all have strengths and weaknesses. Talk about your strengths and weaknesses. A:After I fight someone, I always first say to someone I am sorry. I think this is my strength. I like sleeping late in the morning. It is not easy to wake up early. Sleeping late is my weakness.

강사 첨삭

Q:Nobody is perfect in this world.
We all have strengths and weaknesses.
Talk about your strengths and weaknesses.

A:After I fight someone, I always first say to someone I am sorry.

>> After I fight with someone, I am always the first one to say sorry.
 I think this is my strength.

>> correct!
 I like sleeping late in the morning.

>> correct! 
 It is not easy to wake up early.

>> correct! 
 Sleeping late is my weakness.

>>  correct! 

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