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Teacher Glenda
In not less than 5 sentences, answer the following:
Many people believe that there is another life after the life we have
now. How true is this and would you believe that there is such? Why and
Why not?
< My answer>
I thought \'Is there another life after the life I have now?\'.
>> Correct
But I don\'t think so.
>> Correct
Because, I think when I die then my life will finish.
>> Because, I think when I die my life will be finished.
or
>>> Because when I die, it\'s the end of my life.
When I die then I\'ll don\'t have my body and spirit.
>> Correct
So, I don\'t belive there is another life after the life I have now.
>> Correct
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