7/10 homework

2017-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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In not less than 5 sentences, answer the following: Many people believe that there is another life after the life we have now. How true is this and would you believe that there is such? Why and Why not? <My answer> I thought 'Is there another life after the life I have now?'. But I don't think so. Because, I think when I die then my life will finish. When I die then I'll don't have my body and spirit. So, I don't belive there is another life after the life I have now.

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In not less than 5 sentences, answer the following:
Many people believe that there is another life after the life we have
now. How true is this and would you believe that there is such? Why and
Why not?
< My answer>
I thought \'Is there another life after the life I have now?\'.

>> Correct
 But I don\'t think so. 

>> Correct
Because, I think when I die then my life will finish.

>> Because, I think when I die my life will be finished. 

or

>>> Because when I die, it\'s the end of my life.
 When I die then I\'ll don\'t have my body and spirit.

>> Correct
 So, I don\'t belive there is another life after the life I have now.

>> Correct

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