7.11 Homework :)

First,I want to be the best researcher in my field.Actually,I don't decide what research field I will study.But once it confirms,I'll make my all effort to be professional and confident.To accomplish the dream,I'll never stop practicing to cultivate my abilities and always be sensitive to recent studies to follow the paradigm shift in my research area. My second wish is making a happy family.I've always hoped to live a harmonious life with my adorable family.Of course a family can't always be on good terms,but it is more important that someone exists in the world who can love and take care of you unconditionally. Last but not least,I wish to die well.I seriously want to avoid Alzheimer's disease.I don't want to catch a disease with severe pain.In addition,everyone is going to die but the moment when people die is different.As looking back on the past,some regret the entire life and others are appreciated and satisfied with their life.I hope to be the latter,so close my eyes with smile.

Hi [이름]! Happy Monday! Thanks for doing your essay again. I love reading your homework. You did a good job again. ^^ I can see your improvements here and there. Keep up the good work! Have a great week ahead of you. Teacher Nina   First,I want to be the best researcher in my field. >> Correct! >> OR: I want to be a famous researcher in my field. Actually,I don\'t decide what research field I will study. >> Actually, I am not yet decided on what research field I am going to study. >> OR: Actually, I am not yet sure what field I am going to focus on and study. But once it confirms,I\'ll make my all effort to be professional and confident. >> Did you mean: But once I am already sure, I\'ll do my best to be professional and confident. >> OR: Once it is already confirmed, I\'ll do my best to be professional and confident. To accomplish the dream,I\'ll never stop practicing to cultivate my abilities and always be sensitive to recent studies to follow the paradigm shift in my research area. >> Did you mean: To accomplish my dream, I\'ll never stop practicing to cultivate my abilities, always be sensitive to recent studies and to follow the pradigm shift in my research area. >> OR: To attain my goal, I will keep on enhancing my skills, always be sensitive to recent studies and to follow the pradigm shift in my research area. My second wish is making a happy family. >> My second wish is to make my family happy. >> OR: My second wish is to have a happier family. I\'ve always hoped to live a harmonious life with my adorable family. >> Correct! Of course a family can\'t always be on good terms,but it is more important that someone exists in the world who can love and take care of you unconditionally. >> Of course, a family can\'t always be in good terms, but it is more important that someone exists in the world who can love and take care of you unconditionally. Last but not least,I wish to die well. >> Did you mean: Last but not the least, I wish to die in a good way. >> OR: Last but not the least, I wish to die peacefully. I seriously want to avoid Alzheimer\'s disease. >> Correct! I don\'t want to catch a disease with severe pain. >> I don\'t want to have a disease that will give me severe pains. In addition,everyone is going to die but the moment when people die is different. >> Correct! >> OR: In addition, everyone is going to pass away but the way they die  is different. As looking back on the past,some regret the entire life and others are appreciated and satisfied with their life. >> Did you mean: Looking back on the past, some regret their entire life while other appreciate and satisfied with their life. I hope to be the latter,so close my eyes with smile. >> I hope to be the latter. so I close my eyest with a smile.