7. 11 Homework

2018-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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ESSAY TYPE: Discuss an important conversation you had with someone. What is it all about, why is it important and how did you feel about it. I have ever talked about supporting or opposing abortion with my boyfriend. Of course, I have never been pregnent. It was just discussion topic. He and I both agree with the supporters of abortion because of woman's right. But we said it should be within 2 months because over that period, the creature is like a human. And I said to my boyfriend that, if I'm pregnent and he insists abortion of me, we will break up forever. Even though abortion is done within 2 months, woman's mental and body will break down and the man who want for his partner to do it is a monster I think.

강사 첨삭

Olla [이름]! ^^

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- Blair


I have ever talked about supporting or opposing abortion with my boyfriend. Of course, I have never been pregnent. It was just discussion topic. He and I both agree with the supporters of abortion because of woman\'s right. But we said it should be within 2 months because over that period, the creature is like a human. And I said to my boyfriend that, if I\'m pregnent and he insists abortion of me, we will break up forever. Even though abortion is done within 2 months, woman\'s mental and body will break down and the man who want for his partner to do it is a monster I think.


My boyfriend and I argued whether to oppose or support abortion. Of course, I have never been pregnant, we only discussed it before. We both agree that abortion is possible because of woman\'s right however it should only be within 2 months duration of the pregnancy, because a child\'s body has started to form if he is already over 2 months in a mother\'s womb. Then I told my boyfriend that if he insists to let me abort, we will break up forever. Even though abortion is done within 2 months, woman\'s mental health and physical body may break down and the man who want for his partner to do it is a monster I think.

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