7.11. Monday
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your favorite room in your house? Why?
My favorite room is definitely where I am right now, the bed room. The time when I\'m on the bed, I feel relaxed and comfortable. And I also like a bedtime reading not only for my daugher but also for myself. I\'m reading a book about the way I can buy a real estate in a cheaper price, which is the first and the foremost step abiut the real estate investment.
강사 첨삭
Hi, U [이름]!
Thank you for sharing and that is true. Our own room is where we are most comfortable.
I understand how you feel these days, I know it\'s heavy and tiring. But I know you can make it. Just believe in yourself. If it\'s too much to bear, take a deep breath and relax. Try to think why your goals and when you are ready do it again.
\"If you feel like there\'s something out there that you\'re supposed to be doing, if you have a passion for it, then stop wishing and just do it!\"
~T. Roanne ^_^
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My favorite room is definitely where I am right now, the bed room.
>> My favorite room is definitely where I am right now, the bedroom.
The time when I\'m on the bed, I feel relaxed and comfortable.
>> Correct!
And I also like a bedtime reading not only for my daugher but also for myself.
>> And I also like a bedtime reading not only for my daughter, but also for myself.
I\'m reading a book about the way I can buy a real estate in a cheaper price, which is the first and the foremost step abiut the real estate investment.
>> I\'m reading a book about the way I can buy a real estate in a cheaper price, which is the first and the foremost step about the real estate investment.
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