7.11.Tue
학생이 쓴 원문
7.11.Tue
Q: Why is English fluency significant for you?
A: There are big three purposes the reason english fluency is very significant for me. The first reason is that my college’s professors teach students in english. So I should be able to understand the classes in english. The second reason is that I want to go to abroad for exchanging students. The last reason is that I want to communicate with foreigners immediately. It would be everyone’s wish. As the above three purposes, English fluency is significant for me.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Sandy!
There are big three purposes the reason english fluency is very significant for me.
>>> There are big three purposes why English fluency is very significant for me.
>>> OR: There are big three reasons why English fluency is very significant for me.
The first reason is that my college’s professors teach students in English.
>>> correct
So I should be able to understand the classes in English.
>>> correct
The second reason is that I want to go to abroad for exchanging students.
>>> The second reason is that I want to go abroad as an exchange student.
The last reason is that I want to communicate with foreigners immediately.
>>> correct
It would be everyone’s wish.
>>> correct
As the above three purposes, English fluency is significant for me.
>>> correct
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