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Hey, [이름]! ^^

Thank you for writing this essay.

I think it\'s very interesting.

I was born in the 80\'s and when I was 13, I didn\'t have the luxury of owning a cellphone.

Our saving drives back then were called diskettes and kids who own a b[이름] game were cool.

Not too many kids owned a Playstation and most kids play outside with traditional toys.

Those were the days! kkk.

Anyway, thanks for sharing something about your childhood.

I hope you\'re having a great day.
See you later. ^^

~Teacher Charry

If I could be an any age at all, I want to come back to 13 years old.

>> If I could be of any age at all, I want to become 13 years old again.

OR >> If I could be of any age at all, I want to go back in the time when I was 13 years old.

I have some reasons that I want to come back to that age. 

>> I have some reasons why I want to go back to that age. 
First, i didn\'t have any burden of studying something.

>> First, I didn\'t have any burden of studying something.

When I was 13, I played soccer with my riends after school everyday or playing game with.

>> When I was 13 (years old), I played soccer and other games with my friends after school everyday.
Of course there were some restrictions like setting playing time because of young age, but those are not critical problems.

>> Of course there were some restrictions like curfew because of young age, but those were not critical problems.
Secondly, there were some analogue systems that I want to experience again because those are not exist now.

>> Secondly, there were some analogue systems that I want to experience again because those do not exist now.

For example, I hadn\'t cell phone in that age, so I used home call or puplc phone on the street by using coin.

>> For example, I hadn\'t had a cell phone at that age, so I used the home phone or the public phone at a phone booth by the street by using a coin.

so we can\'t call each other in outside but it has trival intersting things while wating for friends in appointed place.

>> So we can\'t call each other outside but we anticipate waiting for our friends in the appointed place.

Although, those systems have many discomforts of course, but I want to experience it once again because it\'s enjoyful memory to me until now

>> Although those systems have many disadvantages, I still want to experience it again because it\'s still a joyful memory for me.