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2017-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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visit try book enjoy see fascinate take build travel overlook 1. I took a lot of horse-drawn carriages in rural areas while I travel through Bulgaria. 2. Every year, tens of thousands of tourists visit the Blue Mosque, which travel by the Romans in the sixth century. 3. Helen overlook the crowded streets at all as there were a lot of people who enjoy to sell souvenirs to tourists, which she found really annoying. 4. Be silent, please. I can't hear anything. I take a holiday inVirginia with the travel agency at the moment. 5. I saw so many clothes with me when i go for a short vacation because I hate carrying around a lot of luggage. 6. Our hotel room overlook the beach and we could also see the whole area of the hotel from there. 7. The natural and historical riches of Turkey enjoyed millions of visitors from around the world.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

wonderful evening to you! ^^


This activity is actually a bit hard for your level but

I appreciate you exerting effort in doing it. :)

Thumbs up for you dear. :)

Keep up your very good attitude and I hope you will

enjoy your weekend. ^^


Teacher Glenda



1. I took a lot of horse-drawn carriages in rural areas while I travel through Bulgaria.

>> saw, was travelling

>>> I saw a lot of horse-drawn carriages in rural areas while I was travelling through Bulgaria.
 2. Every year, tens of thousands of tourists visit the Blue Mosque, which travel by the Romans in the sixth century.

>> visit, was built

>>> Every year, tens of thousands of tourists visit the Blue Mosque, which was built by the Romans in the sixth century.
 3. Helen overlook the crowded streets at all as there were a lot of people who enjoy to sell souvenirs to tourists, which she found really annoying.

>> didn\'t enjoy, were trying

>>> Helen didn\'t enjoy the crowded streets at all as there were a lot of people who were trying to sell souvenirs to tourists, which she found really annoying.
 4. Be silent, please. I can\'t hear anything. I take a holiday inVirginia with the travel agency at the moment.

>> am booking

>>> Be silent, please. I can\'t hear anything. I am booking a holiday inVirginia with the travel agency at the moment.
 5. I saw so many clothes with me when i go for a short vacation because I hate carrying around a lot of luggage.

>> don\'t take

>>> I don\'t take many clothes with me when i go for a short vacation because I hate carrying around a lot of luggage.
 6. Our hotel room overlook the beach and we could also see the whole area of the hotel from there.

>> was overlooking

>>> Our hotel room  was overlooking the beach and we could also see the whole area of the hotel from there.
 7. The natural and historical riches of Turkey enjoyed millions of visitors from around the world.

>> fascinate

>>> The natural and historical riches of Turkey fascinate millions of visitors from around the world.

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