7, 13 Homework

2018-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Answer the question in not less than 5 sentences: Do people like change? I think it depends on each person's personality. In my case, I don't like a change. Even though it's a good change, I feel scary. My personality is like that. But some people love changes. They always try many methods and go other places where they have never been. That's thier personality. So I can't say that people like change or don't like change.

강사 첨삭

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Enjoy the weekend ~~ Your answer is actually correct. I just need to correct some things see you Monday!

- Blair

I think it depends on each person\'s personality. In my case, I don\'t like a change. Even though it\'s a good change, I feel scary. My personality is like that. But some people love changes. They always try many methods and go other places where they have never been. That\'s thier personality. So I can\'t say that people like change or don\'t like change.

I think it depends on people\'s personality/ individuals. In my case, I don\'t like changes. Even though it\'s a positive change, I feel scared/nervous and that is my personality. However, in some people\'s cases, they love changes. They always try to do a lot of methods or ways, go to other places where they have never been, and by doing that, they feel excited, thrilled and challenged.

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