7.14.Fri
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7.14.Fri(FABULOUS)
Q: In what ways have people\'s eating habits changed over the years?
A: A long time ago, there are less going outside culture. People just cook their rices and eat those. However, as people has leisure and money, they would not to cook and just going outside and paying for food for saving time and effort.
강사 첨삭
Hello, there Sandy!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through writing. I agree with you that in the past, life was simple as the lifestyle. People don\'t enjoy going out because there is nothing to see outside but as the economy rise, we also see the result of this to us, humans.
take care!
T. Aki~
A long time ago, there are less going outside culture.
>>> A long time ago, we have a culture of not spending a lot of time outside.
>>> A long time ago, there are less time to go outside
People just cook their rices and eat those.
>>> People just cook their rice and eat those.
However, as people has leisure and money, they would not to cook and just going outside and paying for food for saving time and effort.
>>> However, as people have leisure and money, they would not cook and just go outside and pay for food to save time and effort.
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