7.15 homework
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Q) What is your favorite season? Why?
A) My favorite season is Spring. Because I think that Spring means start years, so when Spring is coming I feel flutter.
Too cold winter passed, and then the Spring comes. I think that is another change and new start! And I like to Spring breeze. So I love Spring!!
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Hi,
Thank you so much for sending your answer. Spring really has a very nice meaning in relation to a new start. It\'s beautiful. ^^
Thank you so much for sending your answer. Spring really has a very nice meaning in relation to a new start. It\'s beautiful. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
Too cold winter passed, and then the Spring comes. I think that is another change and new start! And I like to Spring breeze. So I love Spring!!
>> My favorite season is spring because I think that spring means start years, so when spring is coming, I feel a flutter.
Too cold winter passes, and then spring comes. I think that is another change and a new start! And I like the spring breeze. So I love spring!!
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