7,16; 7,17hw.
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7,16
Many children can rely their patents financislly until graduate high school.
>> Many children have to rely on their parents financially until they graduate in high school.
Becsuse they have to dtudy many dubjects, play their friends and read many books with enough time.
>> Because they have to study many subjects, play with their friends, and read many books, so they need to have enough time.
They shoulf develop their EQ and IQ.
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7,17
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