7.16 homework

2012-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 abby

학생이 쓴 원문

1.extract Bring the red wine and extract the cork from the bottle! 2.provide Thank you for providing a meal to my dog while i was gone. 3.simultaneous They need simultaneous translation when they have a conversation with their dealers from abroad. 4.subtle He made subtle difference from the last result. 5. spontaneous After she played a violin at the concert,she got spontaneous applause from the audience.

강사 첨삭

Hi Lindsay!^_^    Thanks for posting your homework on our composition board again. I guess you were the one who performed in your last sentence, the one who got a spontaneous applause from the audience. You constructed excellent sentences! I hope that you understood the words by heart so that you will be able use these as you communicate with people. Good day! --T. Ritchel ^^ Here are my corrections for you: 1.extractBring the red wine and extract the cork from the bottle!>>>CORRECT!^_^2.provideThank you for providing a meal to my dog while i was gone.>>>CORRECT! ***Don\'t forget to write \"I\" in a capital letter always.^_^ >>>Thank you for giving my pet  food while I was gone. >>>Thank you for providing my dog a meal while I was away.3.simultaneousThey need simultaneous translation when they have a conversation with their dealers from abroad.>>>CORRECT! 4.subtleHe made subtle difference from the last result.>>>CORRECT! 5. spontaneousAfter she played a violin at the concert,she got spontaneous applause from the audience. >>>CORRECT!^_^ ***Don\'t forget to put some space between the comma (,) and the next phrase. \",) >>>After she played a violin at the concert, she got spontaneous applause from the audience.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·