7. 16 Homework

2018-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

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Answer the question in not less than 5 sentences. Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages? People must take a rest on the holidays not only physically but also mentally. Employers who bully their emplyees with contacting on holidays are very irritating people. In the future, when I become a teacher, I will use 2 phones. I know some people contact teacher anytime so 1 phone is for that and I won't see it after work time. The other phone is for contacting my friends and I will always check it.

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- Blair

People must take a rest on the holidays not only physically but also mentally. Employers who bully their emplyees with contacting on holidays are very irritating people. In the future, when I become a teacher, I will use 2 phones. I know some people contact teacher anytime so 1 phone is for that and I won\'t see it after work time. The other phone is for contacting my friends and I will always check it.

People must take a rest on holidays not only physical but mental. Employers who take advantages by contacting their employees even on holidays are very irritating people. In the future, when I become a teacher, I will use 2 phones. I know some people contact teachers most of the time, so I plan to have another phone for my work and won\'t see it after my working hours. The other phone is for contacting my friends which I would always check.

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