7/17 homework
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[Talk about a time in the past when you had to make a difficult decision. Explain what you did and why.]
As time goes by, it becomes very difficult to decide something.
It requires greater responsibility for me.
Especially, I feel like that when I submit an application to get a job.
Writing resume and application is a very hard task and it takes much time.
I should work and write a paper.
So, I can not apply to all school and research institute.
However, even if I apply with high possibility, often I failed.
It is a very sad thing, but, I had one more experience.
However, interestingly, what to eat for lunch every day is the hardest decision. hahaha...
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you so much with catching up on your homework. I really appreciate the effort! ^ ^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. As adults, it is really hard to make decisions especially about our lives and our future. But, I guess you\'re right. The most difficult thing to decide on everyday is \"WHAT TO EAT!?\" ^ ^
As time goes by, it becomes very difficult to decide something.
>>As time goes by, it becomes very difficult to decide on something.
It requires greater responsibility for me.
It requires greater responsibility for me.
>>It requires a greater responsibility for me.
Especially, I feel like that when I submit an application to get a job.
Especially, I feel like that when I submit an application to get a job.
>>Especially, I feel like that when I submit an application for a job.
Writing resume and application is a very hard task and it takes much time.
Writing resume and application is a very hard task and it takes much time.
>>Writing a resume and an application is a very hard task and it takes much time.
I should work and write a paper.
I should work and write a paper.
>>Correct
So, I can not apply to all school and research institute.
So, I can not apply to all school and research institute.
>>So, I can not apply to all schools and research institutes.
However, even if I apply with high possibility, often I failed.
However, even if I apply with high possibility, often I failed.
>>However, even if I apply with high hopes and expectations, I often fail.
It is a very sad thing, but, I had one more experience.
It is a very sad thing, but, I had one more experience.
>>Correct
However, interestingly, what to eat for lunch every day is the hardest decision. hahaha...
However, interestingly, what to eat for lunch every day is the hardest decision. hahaha...
>>Correct
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