7,18 7,21 hw
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7;18
The create god is Jehova God.
>> The God of creation is Jehova
But Satan have ruled over the world until Jehova will act to judgment of Satan.
>> But Satan has ruled over the world until Jehova will judge to the acts of Satan.
So there are evils in the world.
>> So there are a lot of evil in the wold.
7,,21
I disagree.
>> correct!
Thr happiedt of my life is in my forties.
>> The happiest time of my life is when I am in my forties.
In my forties, I got a lot of experience, wisdom for living and I have good neighbors.
>> In my forties, I had a lot of experiences, wisdom for living, and I have good neighbors.
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