7.18 Homework :)
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Hello [이름]!
A happy Monday to you!
I totally agree with you. I also feel the same way when I have to say No.
We should know how to deal with this situation and keep in mind that we have to be polite.
Thanks for your time. ^^ Talk to you very soon.
Teacher Nina
I usually have difficulties when I have to refuse someone\'s ask for help.
>> Correct
>> OR: I usually have a hard time to refuse when someone is asking for help.
I feel nervous and very uncomfortable.
>> Correct
>> OR: I feel nervous and uneasy.
If the request is more urgent and earnest,I even feel kind of guilt.
>> Did you mean: If the request is urgent and earnest, I even feel guilty.
The reason why I feel like this is that some people understand the situation I have no [이름]ce but to reject,but sometimes others don\'t understand it.
>> Did you mean: The reason why I feel like this is that some people understand the situation and I have no [이름]ce but to reject it, while others don\'t understand it.
Unfortunately,they think I just don\'t want to help them and it can make serious misunderstanding.
>> Unfortunately, they think I just don\'t want to help them and it can lead to a serious misunderstanding.
So,I become stressed and worried about break-up of the relationship when I say No.
>> So I become stressed and worried about the break-up of the relationship when I say No.
>> OR: So I feel stressed and worried that the relationship maybe ruined because I rejected to help them,
However,I know I tend to overestimate bad possibilities and have excessive worries.
>> Correct
This makes me lose confidence in relationships.
>> Correct
I decided that I have to practice refusing No in a polite manner and need to be accustomed to it,
>> Correct
keeping in mind the words,\"Don\'t be afraid of saying No!\".
>> Keep in mind the words, \'Don\'t be afraid of saying No\".
>> OR: I have to keep in mind the saying, \" Don\'t be afraid to say No\".
+) These days,I\'m concerning about many things.
>> These days, I\'m concerned about many things.
>> OR: I am worried about a lot of things these days.
I usually can\'t make a decision instantly.
>> Correct
>> OR: I can\'t make a decision immediately.
This is my weakness but strength at the same time.
>> Correct
That is,I\'m indecisive and slow but careful from a different angle.
>> Correct
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