7.18 Homework :)

2014-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I usually have difficulties when I have to refuse someone's ask for help.I feel nervous and very uncomfortable.If the request is more urgent and earnest,I even feel kind of guilt.The reason why I feel like this is that some people understand the situation I have no [이름]ce but to reject,but sometimes others don't understand it.Unfortunately,they think I just don't want to help them and it can make serious misunderstanding.So,I become stressed and worried about break-up of the relationship when I say No.However,I know I tend to overestimate bad possibilities and have excessive worries.This makes me lose confidence in relationships.I decided that I have to practice refusing No in a polite manner and need to be accustomed to it,keeping in mind the words,"Don't be afraid of saying No!". +) These days,I'm concerning about many things.I usually can't make a decision instantly.This is my weakness but strength at the same time.That is,I'm indecisive and slow but careful from a different angle.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!

A happy Monday to you!

I totally agree with you. I also feel the same way when I have to say No.

We should know how to deal with this situation and keep in mind that we have to be polite.

Thanks for your time. ^^ Talk to you very soon.

Teacher Nina

 

I usually have difficulties when I have to refuse someone\'s ask for help.

>> Correct

>> OR: I usually have a hard time to refuse when someone is asking for help.

I feel nervous and very uncomfortable.

>> Correct

>> OR: I feel nervous and uneasy.

If the request is more urgent and earnest,I even feel kind of guilt.

>> Did you mean: If the request is urgent and earnest, I even feel guilty.

The reason why I feel like this is that some people understand the situation I have no [이름]ce but to reject,but sometimes others don\'t understand it.

>> Did you mean: The reason why I feel like this is that some people understand the situation and I have no [이름]ce but to reject it, while others don\'t understand it.

Unfortunately,they think I just don\'t want to help them and it can make serious misunderstanding.

>> Unfortunately, they think I just don\'t want to help them and it can lead to a serious misunderstanding.

So,I become stressed and worried about break-up of the relationship when I say No.

>> So I become stressed and worried about the break-up of the relationship when I say No.

>> OR: So I feel stressed and worried that the relationship maybe ruined because I rejected to help them,

However,I know I tend to overestimate bad possibilities and have excessive worries.

>> Correct

This makes me lose confidence in relationships.

>> Correct

I decided that I have to practice refusing No in a polite manner and need to be accustomed to it,

>> Correct

keeping in mind the words,\"Don\'t be afraid of saying No!\".

>> Keep in mind the words, \'Don\'t be afraid of saying No\".

>> OR: I have to keep in mind the saying, \" Don\'t be afraid to say No\".
+) These days,I\'m concerning about many things.

>> These days, I\'m concerned about many things.

>> OR: I am worried about a lot of things these days.

I usually can\'t make a decision instantly.

>> Correct

>> OR: I can\'t make a decision immediately.

This is my weakness but strength at the same time.

>> Correct

That is,I\'m indecisive and slow but careful from a different angle.

>> Correct

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