7. 18 Homework

2018-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

Answer the question in not less than 5 sentences. Would you rather: Go on a luxurious vacation or build your dream home? I want to go on a luxurious vacation if I have much money. But I don't have much money, so I read books or study someting home. Thesedays it's very hot in my city. The highest temperature is almost 37 dgree. So even home is not good for reading someting. So I think of going library for staying cool.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

See you tomorrow!

- Blair

I want to go on a luxurious vacation if I have much money. But I don\'t have much money, so I read books or study someting home. Thesedays it\'s very hot in my city. The highest temperature is almost 37 dgree. So even home is not good for reading someting. So I think of going library for staying cool.

I want to go on a luxurious vacation than building my dream home, if I have much money. But I don\'t have, so I read books or study something at home. These days, it\'s very hot/humid in my city. The highest temperature is almost 37 degrees, so reading at home is even uncomfortable, and these days, I think of going to the library to stay cool.

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