7/19 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[Write about something you regret having done. Point out what could have happened if you had not made that decision.]
When I was an undergraduate student, I taught math to a lot of students to earn money.
And I actually earn quite a lot of money.
But, I didn\'t know how important to save money.
I spent a lot of money on shopping and delicious food with friends and family.
It was surely meaningful.
However, I think I should save on my bank account.
If so, I would have borrowed less money from the bank when I got married.
In Korea, the cost of a house is very high and many new married couples borrow the money from the bank.
It was very good that I made my pocket money after becoming an adult.
But, It was a little not enough to learn the economy and improve my economic ability.
I should have learned the happiness and value of saving.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for catching up with your homework. I appreciate the effort you put into it! ^ ^
Good thoughts! Indeed, as early, children should be taught the value and importance of saving. So that, when they will be earning, they would know which one is to be given priority, saving or spending? ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
When I was an undergraduate student, I taught math to a lot of students to earn money.
>>Correct
And I actually earn quite a lot of money.
And I actually earn quite a lot of money.
>>And I actually earned quite a lot of money.
But, I didn\'t know how important to save money.
But, I didn\'t know how important to save money.
>>But, I didn\'t know how important it was to save money then.
I spent a lot of money on shopping and delicious food with friends and family.
I spent a lot of money on shopping and delicious food with friends and family.
>>Correct
It was surely meaningful.
It was surely meaningful.
>>Correct
However, I think I should save on my bank account.
However, I think I should save on my bank account.
>>However, I should have saved money in the bank.
If so, I would have borrowed less money from the bank when I got married.
If so, I would have borrowed less money from the bank when I got married.
>>Correct
In Korea, the cost of a house is very high and many new married couples borrow the money from the bank.
In Korea, the cost of a house is very high and many new married couples borrow the money from the bank.
>>Correct
It was very good that I made my pocket money after becoming an adult.
It was very good that I made my pocket money after becoming an adult.
>>It was very good that I made money after becoming an adult.
But, It was a little not enough to learn the economy and improve my economic ability.
But, It was a little not enough to learn the economy and improve my economic ability.
>>But, it was too late for me to learn about finances and improving my financial capacity.
I should have learned the happiness and value of saving.
I should have learned the happiness and value of saving.
>>Correct
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