7.2
학생이 쓴 원문
Today is It's cloudly and wind.
Also, start a long rainy season.
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I've been on the go all day.
Beacause many patient come.
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강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! Your sentences are getting better. Keep it up! Take care and have a wonderful day!
T. JanE ^^
Today is It\'s cloudly and wind.>> It\'s cloudy and windy today.Also, start a long rainy season.>> The rainy season has started.I\'ve been on the go all day.>> Correct Beacause many patient come.>> Many patients have come.
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