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I selected a research project from government one month ago.
I started to support the research budget of 45000 dollars every year for three years.
I failed many times from the research submission.
So, sometimes I thought that my research is maybe not interest and not important in society.
However, when I knew the decision of the research budget, I felt to achieve recognition from society.
The reason for this thought that this is my greatest accomplishment is this is the first research project from me.
I am a research investigator on this project.
I think it is very impressive start for my future.
I start to take the first step, this experience will be very helpful when I try to a bigger research project.
And my research view will be widened through project achievement.
If I will think this moment after tens of years, it will be a very small experience.
But, this is the greatest achievement in my short life now.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you for this response. It sure is the beginning of many achievements in your life because I am certain that you can achieve more. ^^
-Rachel
I selected a research project from government one month ago.
>> I selected a research project from the government a month ago.
I started to support the research budget of 45000 dollars every year for three years.
I started to support the research budget of 45000 dollars every year for three years.
>> I started with the support research budget of 45,000 US Dollars every year for three years.
I failed many times from the research submission.
I failed many times from the research submission.
>> I failed several times in my research submission.
So, sometimes I thought that my research is maybe not interest and not important in society.
So, sometimes I thought that my research is maybe not interest and not important in society.
>> So, sometimes I thought my work was not interesting or important in the society.
However, when I knew the decision of the research budget, I felt to achieve recognition from society.
However, when I knew the decision of the research budget, I felt to achieve recognition from society.
>> However, when my proposal was accepted and was given a research budget, I felt that I got recognized by the society.
The reason for this thought that this is my greatest accomplishment is this is the first research project from me.
The reason for this thought that this is my greatest accomplishment is this is the first research project from me.
>> This is why I consider this as my greatest achievement.
I am a research investigator on this project.
I am a research investigator on this project.
>> correct
I think it is a very impressive start for my future.
I think it is a very impressive start for my future.
>> correct
I start to take the first step, this experience will be very helpful when I try to a bigger research project.
I start to take the first step, this experience will be very helpful when I try to a bigger research project.
>> I am starting to take the first step, so this experience will be beneficial when I take on bigger projects in the future.
And my research view will be widened through project achievement.
And my research view will be widened through project achievement.
>> correct
If I will think this moment after tens of years, it will be a very small experience.
If I will think this moment after tens of years, it will be a very small experience.
>> correct
>> If I look back at this moment after ten years, it will be an insignificant experience.
But, this is the greatest achievement in my short life now.
But, this is the greatest achievement in my short life now.
>> correct
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