7.20.Thu
학생이 쓴 원문
7.20.Thu
Q: Do men and women use the internet for different purposes? Tell me your thoughts.
A: First, I’m really sorry for my late response. I haven’t thought about this topic. I want to know why did you ask it to me. I don’t think it is different in large. People use the internet for shopping, connecting, doing jobs etc regardless of gender.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sandy!
Thanks for answering the question for the composition writing topic. There was no specific reason for asking this question. I just love to find out students\' thoughts about random topics and ideas in general. ^^ See you again next time!
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT! (TEACHER\'S NOTE: It\'s okay, Sandy!)
I haven’t thought about this topic.
>>CORRECT!
I want to know why did you ask it to me.
>>I want to know why you asked me about this.
I don’t think it is different in large.
>>I don’t think it is different at large.
People use the internet for shopping, connecting, doing jobs, etc. regardless of gender.
>>CORRECT!
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