7.21 & 7.29 Homeworks at the same time :)

7.21 I left early because I had to get to the place far from my house and it took almost 2 hours by bus and subway/It was very expensive,but it was worth purchasing because my mom really liked it and I wanted to give it to her for a birthday gift/They never come on time,so I'd better get into a cafe first/There was a train strike,so I decided to walk to my workplace after I had waited for twice as much as usual time/I'll do it when I finish this project successfully first. 7.29 Machines do not always make our lives happier.The example is a smartphone.Using it,we send messages and play games.It seems quite positive in that we can save time and entertain ourselves.However,we need to pay attention to the negative side of it.Thanks to it,less and less people don't talk with friends and family,face to face for a long time.Rather,they chat in a mobile social community or just kill time playing games.The thing is,a smartphone itself is not a direct problem."We" should use smartphones wisely.

Hi there again [이름]^^Thanks for your time. I appreciate that even though it is your rest time, you still do your essays. I am sure that your mother is really happy and proud of you. Keep it up! We should always show our love to our parents. Talk to you in class. Teacher Nina   7.21 I left early because I had to get to the place far from my house and it took almost 2 hours by bus and subway/ >> Correct >> OR: I left early because I need to reach my destination that is far from my house and it took two hours by bus and subway. It was very expensive,but it was worth purchasing because my mom really liked it and I wanted to give it to her for a birthday gift/ >> Correct >> OR: It was very expensive,but it was worth purchasing because my mom really liked it and I wanted to give it to her as her birthday present. They never come on time,so I\'d better get into a cafe first/ >> Correct There was a train strike,so I decided to walk to my workplace after I had waited for twice as much as usual time >> Did you mean: There was a train strike,so I decided to walk to my workplace after I had waited for a long time as the usual. I\'ll do it when I finish this project successfully first. >> Did you mean: I\'ll do it as soon as I finish this project.7.29 Machines do not always make our lives happier. >> Correct The example is a smartphone. >> Correct >> One example is smartphone. Using it,we send messages and play games. >> Correct It seems quite positive in that we can save time and entertain ourselves. >> Correct However,we need to pay attention to the negative side of it. >> Correct Thanks to it,less and less people don\'t talk with friends and family,face to face for a long time. >> Correct >> OR: Thanks to it, lesser people don\'t talk to their friends and family face to face for a long time. Rather,they chat in a mobile social community or just kill time playing games. >> Correct The thing is,a smartphone itself is not a direct problem. >> Correct \"We\" should use smartphones wisely. >> Correct