7.21.Fri
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I finished my work. I went out for a walk.
-> Finishing my work, I went out for a walk.
2. The monkey sat on a branch. He gibbered.
-> The monkey sitting on a branch gibbered.
3. The road is blocked. We have to take a different route.
-> The road being blocked, we have to take a different route.
4. The weather is fine. So we went out for a walk.
-> The weather being fine, we went out for a walk.
5. The old man was not able to walk. So he sat down for a while.
-> The old man being not able to walk sat down for a while.
6. She is very rich. She can buy just about anything she wants.
-> Very rich, she can buy just about anything she wants.
7. The driver saw the signal. He stopped the car.
-> The driver seeing the signal stopped the car.
8. The thief saw the policeman. He ran away.
-> The thief seeing the policeman ran away.
9. -> Hearing a loud noise, he looked around.
10. -> Hearing the bell, the students rushed to their classes.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름],
We must do our best in order to be successful, but before we become successful we must undergo a certain training and sometimes it is dangerous.
I hope we can be successful in the future even if it is very difficult.
T. Jeny
-> Finishing my work, I went out for a walk.
>>Having finished my work, I went out for a walk.
2. The monkey sat on a branch. He gibbered.
-> The monkey sitting on a branch gibbered.
2. The monkey sat on a branch. He gibbered.
-> The monkey sitting on a branch gibbered.
>>Sitting on a branch, the monkey gibbered.
3. The road is blocked. We have to take a different route.
-> The road being blocked, we have to take a different route.
3. The road is blocked. We have to take a different route.
-> The road being blocked, we have to take a different route.
>>The road being blocked, we had to take a different route.
4. The weather is fine. So we went out for a walk.
-> The weather being fine, we went out for a walk.
4. The weather is fine. So we went out for a walk.
-> The weather being fine, we went out for a walk.
>>correct
5. The old man was not able to walk. So he sat down for a while.
-> The old man being not able to walk sat down for a while.
5. The old man was not able to walk. So he sat down for a while.
-> The old man being not able to walk sat down for a while.
>> Being unable to walk, the old man sat down for a while.
6. She is very rich. She can buy just about anything she wants.
-> Very rich, she can buy just about anything she wants.
6. She is very rich. She can buy just about anything she wants.
-> Very rich, she can buy just about anything she wants.
>>Being rich, she can buy just about anything she wants.
7. The driver saw the signal. He stopped the car.
-> The driver seeing the signal stopped the car.
7. The driver saw the signal. He stopped the car.
-> The driver seeing the signal stopped the car.
>>Seeing the signal, the driver stopped the car.
8. The thief saw the policeman. He ran away.
-> The thief seeing the policeman ran away.
8. The thief saw the policeman. He ran away.
-> The thief seeing the policeman ran away.
>>Seeing the policeman, the thief ran away.
9. -> Hearing a loud noise, he looked around.
9. -> Hearing a loud noise, he looked around.
>>correct
10. -> Hearing the bell, the students rushed to their classes.
10. -> Hearing the bell, the students rushed to their classes.
>>correct
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