7.21 Homework

2015-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! Good morning! If you were given a chance to settle or live in another country for good, where would you to stay and why? If I were given a chance to settle another country for good, I want to stay in Canada. One of my friends has been live in Canada for about 10 years. I heard that there is a good natural environment, or something like that. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]!

Thank you for sharing your country of destination. I must say that Canada is a good country to live in. Anyway, enjoy the rest of your day and see you again!

~Kelly^^

Hi there! Good morning!
>> Correct.
If you were given a chance to settle or live in another country for good, where would you to stay and why?
If I were given a chance to settle another country for good, I want to stay in Canada.

>> Correct.
One of my friends has been live in Canada for about 10 years.

>> One of my friends lived in Canada for about 10 years.

I heard that there is a good natural environment, or something like that.
>> I heard that there is a good and natural environment there, or something like that.
Thank you!

>> Correct.

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