7.22 Homework :)
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강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름]!
Wow! New expressions! Hihihi!
I hope I was able to help you out.
We really need to understand the needs of the a child.
It is important for us to reach out to them in some ways.
You expressed your ideas well. Good job!
Talk to you soon!
Teacher Nina
I think it is hard to find how to entertain children.
>> Correct
>> OR: I think it is difficult to find a way on how to entertain children.
In order to entertain them,we always need to try new things because children are easily get tired of something and find a new and more special thing.
>> In order to entertain them, we always need to try new things because children easily get tired of something and find a new and more special things.
One of ways to make fun is creating games.
>> One way to make it fun is creating games.
Games even can change boring materials to be exciting.
>> Games can even change boring materials to be exciting.
Role play or hide-and-seek are/is kind of old and classic but still seem to be effective to children.
>> Role play or hide-and-seek are kinds of old and classic games but still seem to be effective to children.
In addition,children usually love sweets such as cookies,candies,and so on.
>> Correct
Most parents use them to stop their children\'s tantrums and make them smile.
>> Correct
But be cautious when they use that kind of stuff because sweets can reinforce tantrums of children.
>> Correct
To be honest,I don\'t have a lot of creative idea to amuse children.
>> Correct
I think it is more important for adults to bring down to children\'s level than to have a hard time finding new ways to entertain them./
>> I think it is more important for adults to try to understand children than to have a hard time finding new ways to entertain them.
Q.What do these expressions mean?->
>> Correct
It was time to drop the big guns./
>> Correct
>> I think it means to be serious or to get serious.
We\'d all be knee-deep in strudel./
>> Correct
>> I think it means we would be struggling for success.
I\'m stuck on the sidelines./
>> Correct
>> I think it means I\'m having a hard time with a specific task/ thing.
You sort of got me
>> Correct
>> I think it means you almost got what you want.
>> OR: It means that you almost got what I want to say.
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