7.22 Homework :)

2014-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I think it is hard to find how to entertain children.In order to entertain them,we always need to try new things because children are easily get tired of something and find a new and more special thing.One of ways to make fun is creating games.Games even can change boring materials to be exciting.Role play or hide-and-seek are/is kind of old and classic but still seem to be effective to children.In addition,children usually love sweets such as cookies,candies,and so on.Most parents use them to stop their children's tantrums and make them smile.But be cautious when they use that kind of stuff because sweets can reinforce tantrums of children.To be honest,I don't have a lot of creative idea to amuse children.I think it is more important for adults to bring down to children's level than to have a hard time finding new ways to entertain them./Q.What do these expressions mean?->It was time to drop the big guns./We'd all be knee-deep in strudel./I'm stuck on the sidelines./You sort of got me

강사 첨삭

Good evening [이름]!

Wow! New expressions! Hihihi!

I hope I was able to help you out.

We really need to understand the needs of the a child.

It is important for us to reach out to them in some ways.
You expressed your ideas well. Good job!
Talk to you soon!

Teacher Nina

 

I think it is hard to find how to entertain children.

>> Correct

>> OR: I think it is difficult to find a way on how to entertain children.

In order to entertain them,we always need to try new things because children are easily get tired of something and find a new and more special thing.

>> In order to entertain them, we always need to try new things because children easily get tired of something and find a new and more special things.

One of ways to make fun is creating games.

>> One way to make it fun is creating games.

Games even can change boring materials to be exciting.

>> Games can even change boring materials to be exciting.

Role play or hide-and-seek are/is kind of old and classic but still seem to be effective to children.

>> Role play or hide-and-seek are kinds of old and classic games but still seem to be effective to children.

In addition,children usually love sweets such as cookies,candies,and so on.

>> Correct

Most parents use them to stop their children\'s tantrums and make them smile.

>> Correct

But be cautious when they use that kind of stuff because sweets can reinforce tantrums of children.

>> Correct

To be honest,I don\'t have a lot of creative idea to amuse children.

>> Correct

I think it is more important for adults to bring down to children\'s level than to have a hard time finding new ways to entertain them./

>> I think it is more important for adults to try to understand children than to have a hard time finding new ways to entertain them.

Q.What do these expressions mean?->

>> Correct

It was time to drop the big guns./

>> Correct

>> I think it means to be serious or to get serious.

We\'d all be knee-deep in strudel./

>> Correct

>> I think it means we would be struggling for success.

I\'m stuck on the sidelines./

>> Correct

>> I think it means I\'m having a hard time with a specific task/ thing.

You sort of got me

>> Correct

>> I think it means you almost got what you want.

>> OR: It means that you almost got what I want to say.

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