7.23 Homework :)

Hello again [이름]!

Thanks for sharing your ideas in writing.

Of course! I totally agree with you.

Family is the most important for people.

We should always show them how much we care and love them.

I hope that you had a wonderful weekend.

Teacher Nina

There are several things valuable for me.

>> There are several things that are valuable for me.

First,my laptop computer is precious.

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It is the most expensive possession I have,so I handle it very carefully.

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Actually,it is special because I bought it spending my own money which I earned after working hard at a part-time job.

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>> OR: Actually,it is special because I bought it from the money which I earned after working as a part timer.

I\'m proud of myself.

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Moreover,my USB is necessary and valued.

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There are lots of important information and files of work.

>> There are lot of important information and files from work.

They are priceless,so when I nearly lost it last time,I seriously panicked.

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My smartphone is also valuable,because it\'s like my memory itself.

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It contains scedules,photos,phone numbers,and so on.

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>> OR: It contains schedules, photos, contacts and so on.

It helps me to remind and remember whatever I put into it.

>> It reminds me to remember whatever I put into it.

>> OR: It helps me to remeber the things I have to do and it works as a reminder for me.

However,if I extend the meaning of possessions,not limit to objects, my family is most invaluable in the world.

>> However,if I extend the meaning of possessions, not limited to objects, my family is most invaluable in the world.

I can\'t imagine my life without them.

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It is easy to take a family for granted because they are always near.

On a second thought,when I was little,I said the words that could hurt my parents and sister.

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Now I regret and know how precious they are to me.^^

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