7.23 Homework

2015-07-23 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Kelly! Good morning! Is it a a good idea to have a four day work week? Explain your answer. That sounds fantastic! If I have a chance to have a four day work week, I would like to take a day off on Wednesday, so that I can enjoy my life all the week. but I hope that the salaries should not be reduced due to have a four day work week. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi Mr. [이름]! Thank you for your opinion. I totally agree with you that a four day work week sounds perfect. We can get enough rest and enjoy our time as well. ~Kelly^^ Hi Kelly! Good morning!>> Correct.Is it a a good idea to have a four day work week? Explain your answer.That sounds fantastic! >> Correct.If I have a chance to have a four day work week, I would like to take a day off on Wednesday, so that I can enjoy my life all the week. >> If I have a chance to have a four day work week, I would like to take a day off on Wednesday, so that I can enjoy my life all week. but I hope that the salaries should not be reduced due to have a four day work week.>> But I hope that the salaries should not be reduced even if it\'s just a four day work week.Thank you! >> Correct.

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