7. 23 Homework

2018-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

Answer the question in not less than 5 sentences. Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women. What is your opinion? I think except of the jobs which require strong power from men, men and women can do any jobs they want. But men and women are different in not even body but also mental stucture. So I think there're more suitable jobs for each gender.

강사 첨삭

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- Blair

I think except of the jobs which require strong power from men, men and women can do any jobs they want. But men and women are different in not even body but also mental stucture. So I think there\'re more suitable jobs for each gender.

I think/ I personally think that jobs which require strong power/physical strength from men are not suitable for women, other than that, women are capable of doing any kinds of jobs. However, men and women are different not just in physical strengths, but also in mental health/capability, so there are suitable jobs for men which are not suitable for women, and vice versa.

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