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I don\'t want to do that.
I absolutely agree with the truth that the world is overpopulated and the resources and space are not enough for everyone.
So, if we want to live well, the population should be reduced in the world.
I reminded that the unspecific people were annihilated in the Avengers movie.
The target would be me or my family or friends.
If I get the research project or budget with the agency for defense development, I will do it.
However, it\'s not the meaning of the development of deadly weapons.
There are many kinds of technology for defense development.
All of them are not for killing humans.
However, if someone gives me the budget for the development of poison or weapon for mass destruction, I will refuse that.
I want to work for human and correct things in the world.
But, often science or engineering is located in the opposite side with environment or humans.
So, I believe that fixing a good personal standard is very important to the researchers.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I believe every scientist should have a good moral foundation, so I agree with your last statement. I guess some scientists go against their personal values sometimes because they are forced to do so or they don\'t have a choice, but in the end, what most scientists want is that they contribute for the goodness and benefit of the society, and I am sure you belong to those who want to do good. ^ ^
-Rachel
I don\'t want to do that. I absolutely agree with the truth that the world is overpopulated and the resources and space are not enough for everyone.
>> correct (awesome sentences)
So, if we want to live well, the population should be reduced in the world.
So, if we want to live well, the population should be reduced in the world.
>> correct
I reminded that the unspecific people were annihilated in the Avengers movie.
I reminded that the unspecific people were annihilated in the Avengers movie.
>> I am reminded of an undetermined group of people who were annihilated in the movie, Avengers.
The target would be me or my family or friends.
The target would be me or my family or friends.
>> correct
If I get the research project or budget with the agency for defense development, I will do it.
If I get the research project or budget with the agency for defense development, I will do it.
>> correct
However, it\'s not the meaning of the development of deadly weapons.
However, it\'s not the meaning of the development of deadly weapons.
>> However, it does not mean I am developing deadly weapons.
There are many kinds of technology for defense development.
There are many kinds of technology for defense development.
>> correct
All of them are not for killing humans.
All of them are not for killing humans.
>> correct
However, if someone gives me the budget for the development of poison or weapon for mass destruction, I will refuse that.
However, if someone gives me the budget for the development of poison or weapon for mass destruction, I will refuse that.
>> correct (awesome sentences)
I want to work for human and correct things in the world.
I want to work for human and correct things in the world.
>> I want to work for humans and make some things in the world right.
But, often science or engineering is located in the opposite side with environment or humans.
But, often science or engineering is located in the opposite side with environment or humans.
>> But often science or engineering is located at the opposite side of environment or humans.
So, I believe that fixing a good personal standard is very important to the researchers.
So, I believe that fixing a good personal standard is very important to the researchers.
>> correct
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