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I prefer digital photography.The best thing of digital photography is compatibility.After taking pictures,film has to be developed in order to see the results and edit.On the other hand,a digital camera is convenient because I don't have to go to the developer's.I can just take out the memory card and put it into the computer by myself.Then I can get immediate feedback of how good the pictures are.Moreover,It is much easier to edit digital photos.I'm able to cut,give special effects,change the size of photos with only a few mouse-clicks.These works don't require any difficult professionalism compared to film photograpy.Using digital cameras,I can just follow some explanations although I haven't learned how to take good pictures.However,I need additional techniques to use film cameras.Last but not the least,I like digital photography because it is cost-effective.That is,I don't need to buy any extra films everytime which are quite expensive./Is my essay logically clear?Please evaluate^^

Hello [이름]! Your essay great! I am proud of you! You are getting the hang of it. ^^ Keep it up! All of your ideas are wonderful. Talk to you soon! Have a great day! Teacher Nina   I prefer digital photography. >> Correct! The best thing of digital photography is compatibility. >> The best thing about digital photography is compatibility. >> OR: The best thing about it is compatibility. After taking pictures,film has to be developed in order to see the results and edit. >> Correct! >> Better: After taking pictures, film has to be developed and edited first in order to see the results. On the other hand,a digital camera is convenient because I don\'t have to go to the developer\'s. >> Did you mean: On the other hand, a digital camera is convenient because I don\'t have to go to the photo studio. >> OR: On the other hand, a digital camera is convenient because I don\'t have to go to the a developer. I can just take out the memory card and put it into the computer by myself. >> Correct! Then I can get immediate feedback of how good the pictures are. >> Correct! Moreover,It is much easier to edit digital photos. >> Correct! I\'m able to cut,give special effects,change the size of photos with only a few mouse-clicks. >> Correct! These works don\'t require any difficult professionalism compared to film photograpy. >> Correct! Using digital cameras,I can just follow some explanations although I haven\'t learned how to take good pictures. >> Correct! >> OR: Using digital cameras,I can just follow some instructions although I haven\'t learned how to take good pictures. However,I need additional techniques to use film cameras. >> Correct! >> OR: However, I need additional strategies to use fiml cameras. Last but not the least,I like digital photography because it is cost-effective. >> Correct! That is,I don\'t need to buy any extra films everytime which are quite expensive./ >> Correct! >> OR: I don\'t need to buy any extra films everytime I used it which are quite expensive. Is my essay logically clear?Please evaluate^^ >> Correct!