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Um... I don\'t agree about that, but I think many company people agree about that.
I think if we get a job, we should feel interested, rewarding or at least a sense of duty.
The feeling and sense are able to work and make effort me continuously.
In Korea, there is a sentence \'Do not make your favorite job as a job\'.
It means even if we choose the job for the most favorite something to do, it becomes loose and boring.
It is the most fun and enjoys when it is a hobby.
I agree about this.
I became a researcher because I want to be and hope to invent many new materials.
But, often I depress due to the many obstacles such as unstable research environments and unnecessary long paperwork and so on.
Maybe many people feel like me.
One of my friends is a mathematics teacher in a Hign school.
She really wanted to be a teacher and enjoy to teach students.
But, she also told me sometimes she regrets to become a teacher.
Maybe it is a life.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thanks for your thoughts on this one. I really appreciate it! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
Um... I don\'t agree about that, but I think many company people agree about that.
>>Correct
I think if we get a job, we should feel interested, rewarding or at least a sense of duty.
I think if we get a job, we should feel interested, rewarding or at least a sense of duty.
>>Correct
The feeling and sense are able to work and make effort me continuously.
The feeling and sense are able to work and make effort me continuously.
>>Those feelings will allow me to work continuously and to give my best. (I hope I got this right ^ ^)
In Korea, there is a sentence \'Do not make your favorite job as a job\'.
In Korea, there is a sentence \'Do not make your favorite job as a job\'.
>>Correct
It means even if we choose the job for the most favorite something to do, it becomes loose and boring.
It means even if we choose the job for the most favorite something to do, it becomes loose and boring.
>>It means that even if it is the thing we like to do if we look at it as a job, we loose our interest and it becomes boring.
It is the most fun and enjoys when it is a hobby.
It is the most fun and enjoys when it is a hobby.
>>It becomes fun and enjoyable if we make it as a hobby.
I agree about this.
I agree about this.
>>Correct
I became a researcher because I want to be and hope to invent many new materials.
I became a researcher because I want to be and hope to invent many new materials.
>>Correct
But, often I depress due to the many obstacles such as unstable research environments and unnecessary long paperwork and so on.
But, often I depress due to the many obstacles such as unstable research environments and unnecessary long paperwork and so on.
>>But, often I get depressed due to the many obstacles such as unstable research environment and unnecessary and long paperwork.
Maybe many people feel like me.
Maybe many people feel like me.
>>Maybe, a lot of people feel the same as I do.
One of my friends is a mathematics teacher in a Hign school.
One of my friends is a mathematics teacher in a Hign school.
>>Correct (misspelled \"high\")
She really wanted to be a teacher and enjoy to teach students.
She really wanted to be a teacher and enjoy to teach students.
>>She really wanted to be a teacher and enjoys teaching her students.
But, she also told me sometimes she regrets to become a teacher.
But, she also told me sometimes she regrets to become a teacher.
>>But, she also told me sometimes she regrets becoming a teacher.
Maybe it is a life.
Maybe it is a life.
>>Maybe, that\'s how life is!
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