7/25 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
[Talk about your earliest memory. What happened? How well do you remember the events?]
I remember one day that I went to an art institute with my mother.
Maybe I was under seven years old at that time.
I don\'t like drawing and painting.
Although I can not remember all, my mother said I came back to home alone before finish the class.
So, my mother was surprised because she never taught me how to go back to home by walking.
I think maybe I extremely dislike to learn art.
After then, my mother didn\'t send me to art class.
It was just a funny memory for me.
I learned to play the piano after this event.
I enjoyed that.
My mother said it is very important to know the children\'s taste.
And, Jedah, I have something event so I will go to Seoul right now.
I can not attend class tomorrow.
See you on Monday. Have a nice weekend.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for this homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^
Wow! I didn\'t know you have that strong side in you. You didn\'t like art class so as a show of repulse you walked from that institution to your home! ^ ^ Yes, I agree with your Mom. Parents should know what their children would really like to do instead of forcing them. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I remember one day that I went to an art institute with my mother.
>>I remember a time when I went to an art institute with my mother.
Maybe I was under seven years old at that time.
Maybe I was under seven years old at that time.
>>Correct
I don\'t like drawing and painting.
I don\'t like drawing and painting.
>>Correct
Although I can not remember all, my mother said I came back to home alone before finish the class.
Although I can not remember all, my mother said I came back to home alone before finish the class.
>>Although I can not remember all, my mother said I came back home alone after I finished that art class.
So, my mother was surprised because she never taught me how to go back to home by walking.
So, my mother was surprised because she never taught me how to go back to home by walking.
>>So, my mother was surprised because she never taught me how to go home by walking.
I think maybe I extremely dislike to learn art.
>>Correct
After then, my mother didn\'t send me to art class.
After then, my mother didn\'t send me to art class.
>>My mother has never sent me to the art class ever since then.
It was just a funny memory for me.
It was just a funny memory for me.
>>Correct
I learned to play the piano after this event.
I learned to play the piano after this event.
>>Correct
I enjoyed that.
I enjoyed that.
>>Correct OR
>>I enjoyed playing piano more than art.
My mother said it is very important to know the children\'s taste.
My mother said it is very important to know the children\'s taste.
>>Correct
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