7.25.Tue
학생이 쓴 원문
7.25.Tue
Q: When do you prefer to have a family gathering? Why?
A: I prefer to have a family gathering on New Year’s day and Chuseok. Because that two days are the big party day in Korea. So I think the party day can make our family gathering more happier and special. Also, those days can make everyone adjust the schedules easy.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sandy :) Thank you for lending your time in answering your homework.
You can refer Chuseok as Thanksgiving Day in Korea, if ever other foreigners don\'t know this holiday :) Nonetheless, Great job! See you:)
~ T. Demi ^^
~ T. Demi ^^
I prefer to have a family gathering on New Year’s day and Chuseok.
CORRECT!
OR>> I prefer having a family gathering on New Year\'s Day and Chuseok.
Because that two days are the big party day in Korea.
>> Because those two days are the biggest party days in Korea.
So I think the party day can make our family gathering more happier and special.
>>So, I think the party can make our family gathering happier and more memorable.
Also, those days can make everyone adjust the schedules easy.
>> Also, those days can make everyone adjust their schedules easily.
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