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2024-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

학생이 쓴 원문

I want to learn various expression during the session. I hope this session make me to repeat expression many times. I like that you give me feedback after session. And if you give me homework like memorizing a frequently used expression, It will be help. I will use this class to have communication with many expression sentances.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jane!

Thank you for doing your composition.

Take note of the suggestions below.

If you have any questions, feel free to ask during the class.

Keep practicing!^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

I want to learn various expression during the session.

>> I want to learn various expressions during the session.
I hope this session make me to repeat expression many times.

>> I hope this session would allow me to repeat these expressions many times.
I like that you give me feedback after session.

>> I like that you give me feedback before the session ends.
And if you give me homework like memorizing a frequently used expression, It will be help.

>> It would really help if you ask me to memorize expressions as my homework.
I will use this class to have communication with many expression sentances.

>> I will use this class to communicate using many expressions in sentences.

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