7. 27 Homework

2018-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Blair

학생이 쓴 원문

Answer the question in not less than 5 sentences: Do you think traveling to another country can change the way people think? Yes, I think people can change after traveling to other country. When I went to Japan and Taiwan at first, I thought that the world is so global so other country is very similar with Korea. And I thought the foreign people are not so different with Korean because they laugh when they're happy and they cry when they're sad. I changed my thought that people who live in other country are very different.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름].

Have a happy weekend!

See you on Monday.

- Blair

Yes, I think people can change after traveling to other country. When I went to Japan and Taiwan at first, I thought that the world is so global so other country is very similar with Korea. And I thought the foreign people are not so different with Korean because they laugh when they\'re happy and they cry when they\'re sad. I changed my thought that people who live in other country are very different.

Yes, I think people can change after traveling to other countries, when I went to Japan and Taiwan at first, I thought that the world is so global so other countries may be similar with my national country. I thought the foreign people are not so different with Koreans because they laugh when they\'re happy and they cry when they\'re sad. I changed the thought that people from different countries are very different from each other.

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