7.28 Homework :)

2014-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Nina,I remember last week you said you'll recommend a drama for me../It is not a good idea to judge people by their attitude toward animals,because I think one's attitude toward animals is not much correlated to the overall personality of that person.In fact,there are arguments whether human is different from an animal or similar to it.If men are similar to animals,people will treat men and animals with same attitude.Then we can predict an overall character of people through their attitude to animals.However,in my opinion,most of people don't regard animals as men,so they behave in a different manner.For example,some are very gentle to people but very cruel to animals,or vice versa.In addition,I know some people are kind and warm to their pet but not nice towards men, so don't have any intimate friends in reality.Considering these cases,people's attitude to animals cannot represent themselves.Therefore,we'd better judge people regardless of the manner towards animals./Q.toward=towards?

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] ^^ Thanks for the question. I think I wil explain it in class. It is because the difference is just towards in used in British English. I appreciate you for always being conscious with your grammar. Keep it up! Don\'t worry, I will be glad to discuss it tomorrow. I agree with you, you really expressed your thoughts in an impressive manner. Talk to you tomorrow. Keep up the good work. Teacher Nina   Nina,I remember last week you said you\'ll recommend a drama for me../ >> Nina, I remember last week you said that you\'ll recomment a drama for me. It is not a good idea to judge people by their attitude toward animals,because I think one\'s attitude toward animals is not much correlated to the overall personality of that person. >> Correct >> OR: It is not a good idea to judge people by their attitude toward animals. It is because I think one\'s attitude toward animals is not much correlated to the overall personality of that person. In fact,there are arguments whether human is different from an animal or similar to it. >> Correct >> OR: In fact, there are arguments whether human and animal have similarities. If men are similar to animals,people will treat men and animals with same attitude. >> If men are similar to animals, people will treat men and animals with the same attitude. Then we can predict an overall character of people through their attitude to animals. >> Correct However,in my opinion,most of people don\'t regard animals as men,so they behave in a different manner. >> Correct >> OR: However, I believe that most people don\'t regard animals as men, so they behave in a differently. For example,some are very gentle to people but very cruel to animals,or vice versa. >> Correct In addition,I know some people are kind and warm to their pet but not nice towards men, so don\'t have any intimate friends in reality. >> In addition, I know some people are kind and warm hearted to their pets but not nice towards men. So, they don\'t have any intimate friends in reality. Considering these cases,people\'s attitude to animals cannot represent themselves. >> Correct Therefore,we\'d better judge people regardless of the manner towards animals./ >> Correct Q.toward=towards? >> What is the difference of toward and towards?>> OR: When do we use toward and towards?

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