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hi T. Jane good to see you again how are you going? :) let me introduce myself. you already know about me. but i will introduce everything again. I don't know if it is correct or incorrect about sentences and spelling. please check and advise to me. My name is [Name] [이름]. i'm 23 years old. It's international age. I majored in interior design. I studied in Kyung-sung university. I'm taking a temporary leave from the school. my concern are such as interior, fishing and soccer. l like some active thing. I really want to learn English because when i worked in KPC Australia. initially I had a lot of trouble with my supervisor. because I can't speak my think fluently so I felt so terribly stuffy. hence I thought i want study more English speaking so it is reason why I'm studying English now. I think my strength are such as nice physical,I'm paitient and I can think rightly. I'm so shy to speak my strength by myself ;) my weakness point are I'm lazy and so slow something to do.

Hi there, [이름]! Thanks for your composition! I\'m also glad to hear from you again. I\'m happy to have you as my student. I hope I can be of help to your journey to the English world. Let\'s work hard together, okay?^^ Feel free to let me know about your thoughts and special requests if you have. I hope you will feel more comfortable with me.^^ T. JanE ^^ hi T. Jane good to see you again how are you going? :) >> Hi, T. Jane. Good to see you again. How are you doing?  Let me introduce myself. >> Correct You already know about me. >> Correct but i will introduce everything again. >> But I will introduce myself again.  I don\'t know if it is correct or incorrect about sentences and spelling. >> I don\'t know whether my spelling and sentences are correct or not.  please check and advise to me.>> Please check them and give me some advice.  My name is [Name] [이름]. >> Correct I\'m 23 years old. >> Correct It\'s international age. >> It\'s my international age.  I majored in interior design. >> My major is Interior Design.  I studied in Kyung-sung university. >> I\'m studying in Kyung-sung university.  I\'m taking a temporary leave from the school. >> Correct my concern are such as interior, fishing and soccer. >> I\'m interested in interior design, fishing, and soccer.  l like some active thing. >> I like activities that make me active/energetic.  I really want to learn English because when i worked in KPC Australia. initially I had a lot of trouble with my supervisor. >> I really want to learn English because I had a lot of trouble with my supervisor when I worked in KPC Australia.  because I can\'t speak my think fluently so I felt so terribly stuffy. >> I couldn\'t express my thoughts fluently, so I felt so terribly stuffy.  hence I thought i want study more English speaking so it is reason why I\'m studying English now.>> Hence, I thought of studying English more to improve my speaking skill.  I think my strength are such as nice physical,I\'m paitient and I can think rightly.>> I think my strengths are having nice physical appearance, being patient, and being able to think right.  I\'m so shy to speak my strength by myself ;)>> I\'m actually shy to talk about my strengths.  my weakness point are I\'m lazy and so slow something to do. >> My weakness are being lazy and slow in doing something.