7,28 hw
학생이 쓴 원문
I have a listen very well and I often give my opinion.
And I often act promptly for hard things.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Ms. [이름]!
How are you doing today?
Well, it is a good attitude that you listens very well and you do your work promptly.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
But I would encourage you to write more sentences.
This would help you to express yourself more in English.
I am looking for it next time.
See you later!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I have a listen very well and I often give my opinion.
>> I have listened very well and I often give my opinion.
And I often act promptly for hard things.
>> And I often act promptly when things are hard.
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