7/3 homework
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What things are in your bed?
There are four things on my bed.
First thing is a bear body pillow. I usually use it when my legs are tired.
Second is a green onion cushion. I bought
almost 6 years ago.
Third is a bed sheet using in summer. It is thin than the other common bed sheet so feel better in night.
Finally is a towel instead of a pillow. It is comfortable on my neck.
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~ T. Camille
What things are in your bed?
There are four things on my bed.
There are four things on my bed.
>> CORRECT!
First thing is a bear body pillow.
>> CORRECT!
I usually use it when my legs are tired.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I usually use it when my legs feel tired.
Second is a green onion cushion. >> CORRECT!
I bought almost 6 years ago.
>> CORRECT!
Third is a bed sheet using in summer. >> Third is a bed sheet that I use in summer.
It is thin than the other common bed sheet so feel better in night.
>> It is thinner than other common bed sheets, so feel better at night.
Finally is a towel instead of a pillow.
>> CORRECT!
It is comfortable on my neck.
>> CORRECT!
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