7.3 Homework :)

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I think a small or medium-sized city is the best place to raise my children and live with my family.

>> Correct 

This is because both big city and the country are not good for living.

>> It is because big city and countryside are not good places to live.

>> OR: Both the big city and countryside are not good places to live.

First, big city is too crowded and make people too competitive.

>> First, big city is too crowded and it makes people to be too competitive.

>> OR: Firstly, living in a big city is too crowded and it makes people to be too competitive.

I don\'t want my child to be stressed out from the competition at school.

>> Did you mean: I don\'t want my child to be stressed out because of the competition in school.

There are so many people wherever I go in big city.

>> There are so many people wherever I go in a big city.

>> OR: I can see a lot of people wherever I go in a city.

I prefer more calm and peaceful atmosphere.

>> I prefer a more clam and peaceful atmosphere.

However, the countryside is also not the best place to raise a family.

>> Correct 

>> OR: However, countryside is also not a great place to raise kids and reside in.

Although the rural area has great natural environment such as many trees and fresh air,cultural and educational resources are deficient.

>> Did you mean: Although, rural area has a great natural environment such as many trees and fresh air, the cultural and educational resources are deficient.

>> OR: Although, countryside has a lot of natural resources that you can enjoy, there are still things that are not enough such as cultural and educational resources.

The resources are concentrated in cities.

>> Correct 

I hope my family can utilize and enjoy the resources such as concert and famous speech.

>> Did you mean: I hope that my family can utilize and enjoy the resources such as concerts and seminars.

>> OR: I hope that my family can attend concerts and listen to famous people who give speech in public.

The thing is that this difficulty makes quite a huge gap especially between children who live in the city and rural area.

>> Correct 

>> OR: This differences make a huge gap between children who live in the city and rural area.

Therefore, I think a medium-sized city is the best to raise a family because it can compromise good and bad things of two poles(big city&country).

>> Correct 

>> OR: Therefore, I think a medium-sized city is the best place to raise a family because it can compromise the good and bad things about the two places.