7.3 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! I had a long meeting in the morning that related the half this year's sales strategy, so I hand in my homework so late.
Can you live without television? Why or why not?
No, I don't think I can live without television. Once I tried to live without television a few months ago, but it was too difficult to live without TV, because we can get lots of information through TV. I think watching too much TV is bad for our health.
Have a great weekend!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework even though you were busy. Have a great weekend, too.
~Kelly^^
Hi there! I had a long meeting in the morning that related the half this year\'s sales strategy, so I hand in my homework so late.
>> Hi there! I had a long meeting in the morning related to the half of this year\'s sales strategy, so I hand in my homework so late.
Can you live without television? Why or why not?
No, I don\'t think I can live without television.
>> Correct.
Once I tried to live without television a few months ago, but it was too difficult to live without TV, because we can get lots of information through TV.
>> Once, I tried to live without television a few months ago but it was too difficult because we can get lots of information on TV.
I think watching too much TV is bad for our health.
>> Correct.
Have a great weekend!
>> Correct.
Thank you for doing your homework even though you were busy. Have a great weekend, too.
~Kelly^^
Hi there! I had a long meeting in the morning that related the half this year\'s sales strategy, so I hand in my homework so late.
>> Hi there! I had a long meeting in the morning related to the half of this year\'s sales strategy, so I hand in my homework so late.
Can you live without television? Why or why not?
No, I don\'t think I can live without television.
>> Correct.
Once I tried to live without television a few months ago, but it was too difficult to live without TV, because we can get lots of information through TV.
>> Once, I tried to live without television a few months ago but it was too difficult because we can get lots of information on TV.
I think watching too much TV is bad for our health.
>> Correct.
Have a great weekend!
>> Correct.
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