7/3 homework

2017-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

Creative writing: What is the happiest moment of your life? Give the details. <My answer> When I win a prize in the piano competiton,it's happiest moment of my life.Beacause I like playing the piano and I like join piano competition. I won't forget how to play the pano. Beacause I like playing the piano!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]^^

good afternoon! ^^


Congratulations! ^^

I know that you are a smart girl and I always thank you

because I know that you are always doing your best in class. :)

Continue what you love doing and continue loving it. :)


See you ^^


Teacher Glenda 


Creative writing:
What is the happiest moment of your life? Give the details.
< My answer>
When I win a prize in the piano competiton,it\'s happiest moment of my life.

>> When I won a prize in a piano competition, it\'s the happiest moment of my life.

Beacause I like playing the piano and I like join piano competition.

>> Because I like playing the piano and I like joining piano competition.

I won\'t forget how to play the pano. Beacause I like playing the piano!

>> I won\'t forget how to play the piano because I like playing the piano!

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