7.30 Homework :)

A long time ago,I held a party to celebrate my 11th birthday.I invited many friends.They came to my house and had a great time.I also lent books to some of my friends.I believed each friend would get back the book.One of books was of my favorite series,Greek Roman Myths.However,the boy who borrowed it didn't return it after quite a long time.I asked him to return it as soon as possible and waited more.Despite of my warning,he didn't turn in the book.Finally,I became angry and strongly asked him again.He confessed that he actually lost my book!I was so shocked that I didn't know what I had to do at that time.He promised to compensate the pay of it or buy me a new one.So,I gave him one more chance. But,after all,he never gave it back or bought one.Remembering that time,it seemed like that I was so disappointed with the friend and thought it was no worth forcing him anymore.Since the bad event,I've been usually reluctant to lend my books to someone except close friends or reliable people.

Good evening [이름]! Happy Thursday! Oh! I\'m sorry to hear about that story. I know how you feel because it was your favorite book. I hope that your friend will do something to make you feel better. Talk to you very soon. Please go over the corrections I provided for you. Teacher Nina   A long time ago,I held a party to celebrate my 11th birthday. >> Correct >> OR: Long time ago, I had a party to celebrate my eleventh birthday. I invited many friends. >> Correct They came to my house and had a great time. >> Correct I also lent books to some of my friends. >> Correct I believed each friend would get back the book. >> I believed that each friend would give back my book. >> OR: I belived that each of my friends would give back my book. One of books was of my favorite series,Greek Roman Myths. >> One of the books was my favorite series, Greek Roman Myths. However,the boy who borrowed it didn\'t return it after quite a long time. >> Correct >> OR: However, the boy who borrowed it didn\'t give it back after some time. I asked him to return it as soon as possible and waited more. >> Correct Despite of my warning,he didn\'t turn in the book. >> Correct >> OR: Despite of my warning, he didn\'t return the book. Finally,I became angry and strongly asked him again. >> Correct He confessed that he actually lost my book! >> Correct I was so shocked that I didn\'t know what I had to do at that time. >> Correct He promised to compensate the pay of it or buy me a new one. >> Correct >> OR: He promised to pay for it or buy me a new one. So,I gave him one more chance. >> Correct But,after all,he never gave it back or bought one. >> Correct Remembering that time,it seemed like that I was so disappointed with the friend and thought it was no worth forcing him anymore. >> Remembering that time,it seemed like that I was so disappointed with my friend and thought it was no worth forcing him anymore. Since the bad event,I\'ve been usually reluctant to lend my books to someone except close friends or reliable people. >> Correct >> OR: Since that bad experience of mine, I\'ve been usually reluctant to lend my books to someone except close friends or reliable people.